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jollysalman

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Sir please tells us the solution if u told us for late-seating so as u know that we continually work at office 8 hour without rest. so sir tell us how can we work properly in late-seating. If we are tried work in late-seating so cannot have time for our family because after late-seating we haven’t enough energy for anything. As u know our work increase day by day Therefore our humble request please provides us 2 more assistant for billing department.
 

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Sir please tells us the solution if u told us for late-seating so as u know that we continually work at office 8 hour without rest. so sir tell us how can we work properly in late-seating. If we are tried work in late-seating so cannot have time for our family because after late-seating we haven’t enough energy for anything. As u know our work increase day by day Therefore our humble request please provides us 2 more assistant for billing department.
Sir, as you know, we already work eight hours without a break. If you insist that we work overtime we will not be able to work effectively; furthermore, we will not have time to spend with our families. As you are aware, the volume of work in the billing department is increasing day by day and we are in need of two more assistants. We humbly request that you take note of our concerns and take the necessary steps to remedy the situation.
 
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we will not be able to work effectively; furthermore, we will not have time to spend with our families.
Semi colon? Full stop? I feel it needs something here.
 

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Sir please tells us the solution if u told us for late-seating so as u know that we continually work at office 8 hour without rest. so sir tell us how can we work properly in late-seating. If we are tried work in late-seating so cannot have time for our family because after late-seating we haven’t enough energy for anything. As u know our work increase day by day Therefore our humble request please provides us 2 more assistant for billing department.
Sir, as you know, we already work eight hours without a break. If you insist that we work overtime we will not be able to work effectively; furthermore, we will not have time to spend with our families. As you are aware, the volume of work in the billing department is increasing day by day and we are in need of two more assistants. We humbly request that you take note of our concerns and take the necessary steps to remedy the situation.
Thank you very much
 
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