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Occupation/art/hobby of face reading it's maybe harmful for a sensitive humans. because written each n every face have a painful story.
 

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:-D I think there are the happy stories too, it depends what we choose to read.
 

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:-D I think there are the many happy stories too, it depends what we choose to read.
@ lyfen: no doubt you're right but your think is mirror of dream and my quotation nearby to real world. Today you easily find out but a real happy face you find rarely. happiness not stay forever with us but ofcourse: sadness never gone from amature life.
 

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Occupation/art/hobby of face-reading may be harmful to sensitive humans because every face writes painful story every day.

:up: :up:
 

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Occupation/art/hobby of face-reading may be harmful to sensitive humans because every face writes painful story every day.:up: :up:
@ AppleRome. What you think about thisHabits of face-reading may be harmful to sensitive humans because every face writes painful story every day.
 

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Occupation/art/hobby of face-reading may be harmful to sensitive humans because every face writes painful story every day.:up: :up:
Hello@AppleRome. What you think about saying like that. its something better than before post. but as per my think: its not perfect. maybe for much better making this quote possibilities also available here.Habits of face-reading may be harmful to sensitive humans because every face writes painful story every day.
 

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@ lyfen: no doubt you're right but your think is mirror of dream and my quotation nearby to real world. Today you easily find out but a real happy face you find rarely. happiness not stay forever with us but ofcourse: sadness never gone from amature life.

i think you are right, i believe in destiny, but i think, being happy it depends on us,as being positive way is essential in the life.
 

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@ AppleRome. What you think about thisHabits of face-reading may be harmful to sensitive humans because every face writes painful story every day.
"Habits" sounds perfect with the sentence, nonetheless, dont your ownself also want to make it wider as "occupation" since it is also a kind of job? Maybe you can elaborate your paragraph by doing that.

NOT A TEACHER, JUST SISSY :shock::shock:.
 

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Thanks@ AppleHome {_I accept you as Sissy_} Thank you so much for that.Take care yourself
"Habits" sounds perfect with the sentence, nonetheless, dont your ownself also want to make it wider as "occupation" since it is also a kind of job? Maybe you can elaborate your paragraph by doing that.NOT A TEACHER, JUST SISSY :shock::shock:.
 

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