[Essay] a true getaway

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Please help me correct the following paragraph. Thanks!

We had a splendid time eating and playing games in the Penghu islands. It’s a scenic place to escape into nature. The beauty remains strongly impressed on my memory. The Penghu islands are a true escape that unlike any other in Taiwan. It’s like a trip to a different world. Mine was a happy vacation. I hope I can visit there again.
 
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What is the purpose of this piece of writing? What are you going to do with it?
 

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This piece of writing is the conclusion of a manuscript of a prepared speech.
 

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This piece of writing is the conclusion of a manuscript of a prepared speech.
ems' question is code for "Is this homework?" (I believe) and is meant to be answered in such a way that this determination can be made.
 

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It's not homework. I just rewrote the last part of a prepared speech which I have previously written and which I found some errors.
 

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ems' question is code for "Is this homework?" (I believe) and is meant to be answered in such a way that this determination can be made.

Raymott - the original Enigma Machine! ;-)
 

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We had a splendid time eating and playing games in the Penghu islands. It’s a scenic place, perfect for escaping into nature. The beauty remains strongly impressed on my memory. The Penghu islands are a true escape [You've said that. Can you think of another descriptive word?] [STRIKE]that[/STRIKE] unlike any other in Taiwan. It’s like a trip to a different world. Mine was a happy vacation. I hope I can visit there again.
It's almost perfect.
 

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The Penghu islands are a true getaway unlike any other in Taiwan.
 
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