angelene001
Member
- Joined
- Mar 21, 2012
- Member Type
- Interested in Language
- Native Language
- Polish
- Home Country
- Poland
- Current Location
- Poland
I feel that something is missing here and someone reading this won't understand what I have in mind.
It's a semi-formal letter. I'd like to invite someone from abroad to visit me in my country. First, I write that this person is welcome to come to my country and spend a few days. And then:
Would you like me to offer some convenient time to visit?
What's wrong here? What should I change or add?
Would you like me to offer you some convenient time for your visit? --> Is this better?
I'm not sure about the use of "time" here.
Maybe I should write "convenient dates".
It's a semi-formal letter. I'd like to invite someone from abroad to visit me in my country. First, I write that this person is welcome to come to my country and spend a few days. And then:
Would you like me to offer some convenient time to visit?
What's wrong here? What should I change or add?
Would you like me to offer you some convenient time for your visit? --> Is this better?
I'm not sure about the use of "time" here.
Maybe I should write "convenient dates".