Ashiuhto
Senior Member
- Joined
- Nov 30, 2010
- Member Type
- English Teacher
- Native Language
- Chinese
- Home Country
- Taiwan
- Current Location
- Taiwan
Is the following sentences acceptable?
Once I took the train back to Taipei from Ilan. In the halfway Juifang station, a group of high school students got on the coach. Crowding outside the toilet, they were noisily laughing and joking as if there were no one else. I just came out of the lavatory, while the train was making a turn; I hit one of the students.
Once I took the train back to Taipei from Ilan. In the halfway Juifang station, a group of high school students got on the coach. Crowding outside the toilet, they were noisily laughing and joking as if there were no one else. I just came out of the lavatory, while the train was making a turn; I hit one of the students.