Please correct my grammar and vocabulary usage?

tonylearningenglish1212 said:

Hi, I'm going to share a Santa Claus song video on my Facebook page (?) but I'm not sure what to say. Should I say "While I've already known the truth about Santa Claus, this song is nevertheless still one of my favourite Christmas songs. "? Would you please correct my grammar and [STRIKE]vocabularies [/STRIKE] vocabulary here? Thank you.
While I already know the truth about Santa Claus, this song is, nevertheless, still one of my favorite Christmas songs.
While I have known the truth about Santa Claus for a long time, this song is, nevertheless, still one of my favorite songs.

Tony

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tonylearningenglish1212 said:

Hi again, I used to have some argument with my facebook friends before. Now I would like to reconcile with them. I am going to post something on my facebook note. Should I say something like this?

"Christmas is near. It is time for us to show love to each other and reconcile after our past quarrels. Therefore, I decide to apologize if I insulted any of you before."


Please correct my grammar and vocabulary use. Thanks.

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tonylearningenglish1212 said:

Hi again, I used to have some argument with my facebook friends before. Now I would like to reconcile with them. I am going to post something on my facebook note. Should I say something like this?

"Christmas is near. It is time for us to show love to each other and reconcile after our past quarrels. Therefore, I decide to apologize if I insulted any of you before."


Please correct my grammar and vocabulary use. Thanks.

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