Is there someone who can please edit my letter here? many thanks in advance

Eugene1982 said:

Dear Dr. Aaaaa,
Our office here in Jeddah is urgently in need of engineers with the following requirements:

I. One (1) Electrical Engineer:
(a.) licensed & professional engineer
(b.) minimum experience of at least 5 years
(c.) [STRIKE]expose in[/STRIKE] has worked in construction and design
(d.)[STRIKE] ex- abroad is x factor[/STRIKE] Previous overseas experience is an advantage
(e.) experience in low and medium voltage

II. One (1) Architectural Engineer:
(a.) licensed & professional engineer
(b.) minimum experience of at least 5 years
(c.) experienced in supervision and design
(d.)[STRIKE] former abroad is advantage[/STRIKE] Previous overseas experience is an advantage
(e.)knowledgeable in autocad, 3D Max and MS Office
applications

May we request [STRIKE]therefore to please send us prospect[/STRIKE] lists of prospective candidates based on the above-mentioned requirements. We would appreciate these as soon as possible.

[STRIKE]We are looking forward for an immediate feedback from you. [/STRIKE]

Many thanks and best regards,

Engr. Bbbbb Ccccc
General Manager

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