rainous
Member
- Joined
- Jun 8, 2011
- Member Type
- Other
- Native Language
- Galician
- Home Country
- Armenia
- Current Location
- Antilles
"One can’t help but to think what people have been worried about is slowly turning into a reality after hearing about the survey conducted by the Supreme Court that divorce rate among the newly wedded couples is soaring on top of having the highest divorce rate in the world."
With regard to the underlined phrase,
I guess what I am trying to say is reaching the highest divorce rate in the world was known from the past surveys but now the new survey reveals the soaring divorce rate among newly wedded couple.
Does the above sentence accurately reflect the intention?
If not, any suggestions?
Also I would be grateful if you could comment on the general structure of the sentence, whether it's acceptable grammatically or not.
Much appreciated.
With regard to the underlined phrase,
I guess what I am trying to say is reaching the highest divorce rate in the world was known from the past surveys but now the new survey reveals the soaring divorce rate among newly wedded couple.
Does the above sentence accurately reflect the intention?
If not, any suggestions?
Also I would be grateful if you could comment on the general structure of the sentence, whether it's acceptable grammatically or not.
Much appreciated.