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    hello! I wrote a letter of introduction about me. but It is not easy.
    would you correct my mistakes?
    thank you :)


    1. After graduation, I worked at Travel Agency.
    but I wasn't interest in doing tourism
    2. I'm not good at English.
    I applied for institute that teaching English for children.
    (Fortunately/Luckly), I've been working there for 1 year.
    Now I'm a great interest in teaching English.

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    Tdol is offline Editor, UsingEnglish.com
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    1 After graduating, I worked in a Travel Agency but found that I was not interested in tourism (However, might this not be a bit negative??)
    2- I am not good at English

    Last edited by Tdol; 31-Jan-2005 at 11:15.

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    I applied to work at an institute where they teach English to children. After working there for a year, I am very interested in teaching English.

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