I just took glimpse of yours again and did some revision. hope it helps.
Please let me know if every phrase is understandable.
I need to translate it for my friends. Excuse me if the content will seem to you a bit rude. I tried to be close to Russian variant.
It is widely known
,that the law of Republic Z prohibits sexual outrages of any type. That is why every Thursday a public ceremony is held to establishforge/witness (will such words be better, do you think?the unions of love. It is held for those who want to legitimate their hook-up once over lightly(??? Not so sure that you meant here? do you mean casual affair?. At 22.00 prompthow about "sharp" (current local time in Popovka), all lovers go up Stairs in the Sky. In the crossing of elements (Not so sure here? it is some traditional custom?they promise each other anything and confess(follwed usually by something not so good) express/vow their love to each other. After that, just married couplethe newly-wedded couplessend[ sa star to the sky, which will shine while their union of heartsthe union of their heartswill exist. It is said ,that this day of all others a stranger will agree to marry if to propose him/her.(not so clear what you mean here
Freak Parade – three trials
This Parade is a trial for everyone.
Be sure that nobody willcome off unscathed!!!! It is made sure that nobody will come off unscathed? .(Do you mean no one will be safe?
,who goes throughwithstands/endures/survivesall trials ,can declare boldlyproudlythat he wentgoesthrough thick and thin!!!
Thank you in advance
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