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    Default Help with a sentence

    Can somebody please comments the English?

    "Upon completing data collection for the final study in December 2008,my master study has been progressing well".

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    Dean

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    Default Re: Help with a sentence

    Quote Originally Posted by dean View Post
    Can somebody please comments the English?

    "Upon completing data collection for the final study in December 2008,my master study has been progressing well".

    Regards,

    Dean
    Hi Dean,

    I can find some mistakes in your sentence. They are in blue and underline words (phrase) below. The correct sentence is:

    Upon completing data collection for the last course in Dec. 2008, I have progressed very much.

    Regards,
    Mr.Tuan

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