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    Default PLEASE HELP REPHRASE THE FOLLOWING ...

    We aim to provide our clients with a customized range of services while buying, letting or selling real estate property. We do this by providing a broad exposure that allows a fast sale or letting of your property through effective targeted marketing of your property.
    We also handle other aspects of the property business such as valuations, sale or lease agreements by liaising with other professionals in the field in order to efficiently and effectively deliver to our clients.

    PLEASE HELP ME REPHRASE THE ABOVE PARAGRAPH
    Last edited by Realcom; 31-Jul-2009 at 11:42. Reason: make it more user friendly

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    Default Re: PLEASE HELP REPHRASE THE FOLLOWING ...

    Quote Originally Posted by Realcom View Post
    We aim to provide our clients with a customized range of services while buying, letting or selling real estate property. We do this by providing a broad exposure that allows a fast sale or letting of your property through effective targeted marketing of your property.
    We also handle other aspects of the property business such as valuations, sale or lease agreements by liaising with other professionals in the field in order to efficiently and effectively deliver to our clients.

    PLEASE HELP ME REPHRASE THE ABOVE PARAGRAPH
    Hello
    You have posted a number of similar requests for rephrasing. It would be more constructive if you posted your own versions if you want more user-friendly English and then asked for input. I think you will find this site is not here to do the work for you. However, this kind of legal English is very common when there is a lot of detail.

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