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    st_hart is offline Newbie
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    Default Welcome message in website

    I have a live website providing ebooks to download. And this is the welcome message.


    (Website's name) provides you free ebooks to download. New content is added on a regular basis. You can expect new free ebooks every two or three days. Downloading any freebies available here is (once again) free. No registration needed. Just pick and download the ones you need or you like.
    Grab them now.


    Do you think it is properly written? Does it properly deliver what I want to say? Any typo or grammar? Thanks very much for helping :)

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    Default Re: Welcome message in website

    Hi st_hart


    • ... provides free ebooks ....


    • Downloading any freebies available here is (once again) free.


    • Just pick and download the ones you need or like.

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    st_hart is offline Newbie
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    Default Re: Welcome message in website

    Hi Soup

    Thanks so much for correcting. I will edit it accordingly.
    Thanks :)

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