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    moeen49 Guest

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    Hi,

    Could you tell me how apprperiate is this section:


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    MCSD IT Professional with over ten years experience in system design and development. Architect, design and develop systems with in-depth knowledge of database, networking and Internet technologies. Has strong analytical and interpersonal skill. Extremely fast learner can usually learn quickly through independent study.

    Any help would be appreciated,
    Alan


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    Profile:
    MCSD IT Professional with over ten years' experience in system design and development. Architect, design and develop (These three need changing for me. If architect is a noun for you, then the two following should be designer and developer. If you mean the area, then shouldn't it be architecture?) systems with in-depth knowledge of database, networking and Internet technologies. Has (You could delete the verb- it doesn't add much) strong analytical and interpersonal skills. Extremely fast learner can usually learn quickly through independent study (I'd change this to sound more confident- . Extremely fast learner- able to learn trhough independent study)


    Any use?


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    moeen49 Guest

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    Thank you for help.

    Do you think this one has right grammar and punchuation?

    Profile:

    • MCSD IT Professional with over ten years' experience in system design and development

    • Architecture, design and develop systems with in-depth knowledge of database, networking and Internet technologies
    • Strong analytical and interpersonal skills
    • Extremely fast learner- able to learn through independent study

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    Architecture, design and development of systems

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    It doesn't sound familiar to me. Do you think that I should give-up this part?

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    System(s) architecture, design and development

    ???

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