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    please correct my text

    We shall amend LC for the correct beneficiary name accordingly and you need to bear the amendment fee of HKD350.00. Please send us the original documet when you receive the amendment for the comapny name from Helen


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    Re: please correct my text

    Quote Originally Posted by Zoe2008 View Post
    We shall amend LC for the correct beneficiary name accordingly and you need to bear the amendment fee of HKD350.00. Please send us the original documet when you receive the amendment for the comapny name from Helen

    By "amendment for the company name", do you mean they are going to adjust the name of the company on their documentation? If this is the case, then here's my rewrite.


    We shall amend the LC to show the correct beneficiary name. Please, submit the amendment fee of 350.00 HKD. As well, please, send us the original document when you receive the amendment to the company name from Helen.

    note: I don't think it is necessary to use "accordingly".

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    Re: please correct my text

    Quote Originally Posted by PROESL View Post
    By "amendment for the company name", do you mean they are going to adjust the name of the company on their documentation? If this is the case, then here's my rewrite.


    We shall amend the LC to show the correct beneficiary name. Please, submit the amendment fee of 350.00 HKD. As well, please, send us the original document when you receive the amendment to the company name from Helen.

    note: I don't think it is necessary to use "accordingly".
    Hi Proesl,

    Thanks for the correction. Do you think it should use 'on' for the last sentence? Please comment.

    As well, please, send us the original document when you receive the amendment on the company name from Helen.

    Regards
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    Quote Originally Posted by Zoe2008 View Post
    Hi Proesl,

    Thanks for the correction. Do you think it should use 'on' for the last sentence? Please comment.

    As well, please, send us the original document when you receive the amendment on the company name from Helen.

    Regards
    Zoe
    No, I don't think so. I would use "amendment to".




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    Re: please correct my text

    Quote Originally Posted by Zoe2008 View Post
    We shall amend LC with the correct beneficiary name. You are required to bear the amendment fee of HKD350.00. Please send us the original document when you receive the amendment for the company name from Helen
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