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    Default Please help to modify two sentences

    As per your forwarder advised that, the next vessel will be closed on 13 Aug. Please remit the balance payment of USD15, 981.00 to us today, we will try to catch this vessel as soon as we receive your payment.

    Please release the payment to us today if possible; otherwise, we are unable to catch the vessel closing on 13 to catch as per your last advised.

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    Default Re: Please help to modify two sentences

    Try:
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    As your forwarder advised, the next vessel will be closed on 13 Aug. Please remit the balance of USD15, 981.00 to us today. We will try to catch this vessel as soon as we receive your payment.
    Please release the payment to us today if possible. Otherwise, we will be unable to catch the vessel closing on the 13th to catch as per your last message.
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    Unfortunately, I am not sure what you mean by catch the vessel.


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    Default Re: Please help to modify two sentences

    Quote Originally Posted by RonBee View Post
    Try:
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    Unfortunately, I am not sure what you mean by catch the vessel.
    Hi Ronbee,

    Thanks for your correction. I mean meet the vessel. Is it correct? Please comment.

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    Default Re: Please help to modify two sentences

    Quote Originally Posted by Zoe2008 View Post
    Hi Ronbee,

    Thanks for your correction. I mean meet the vessel. Is it correct? Please comment.
    That makes more sense to me. Is the vessel a ship?


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