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    vil is offline VIP Member
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    have the right/are entitled,entitled/under the title,proper/due,

    Dear teachers,

    Would you be kind enough to share with me your opinion concerning rephrasing of the following sentences?

    You have the right to make your own choice.
    You are entitled to make your own choice.
    Gregory’s property gave him the right to stay at the Triton Hotel.
    Gregory’s prosperity entitled him to stay at the Triton Hotel.
    I have just read an article entitled “Election in Great Britain”.
    I have just read an article under the title “Election in Great Britain.”
    Blount would often come to the place. He did not like the idea of leaving Gregory alone with Imagene.
    Blount frequented the place. He resented the idea of leaving Gregory alone with Imogene.
    The proposal must be given proper consideration.
    The proposal must be given due consideration.
    He has the reward that he deserves.
    He has the reward that is entitled to him.
    Too much attention is being paid to such a trifling matter.
    Undue attention is being paid to such a trifling matter.
    She likes to poke her nose into other people’s affairs.
    She likes to pry into other people’s affairs.

    Thank you for your efforts.

    Regards,

    V

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    sarat_106 is offline Key Member
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    Exclamation Re: have the right/are entitled,entitled/under the title,proper/due,

    Quote Originally Posted by vil View Post
    Dear teachers,

    Would you be kind enough to share with me your opinion concerning rephrasing of the following sentences?

    You have the right to make your own choice.OK
    You are entitled to make your own choice.Ok
    Gregory’s property gave him the right to stay at the Triton Hotel. Ok
    Gregory’s prosperity entitled him to stay at the Triton Hotel. Ok
    I have just read an article (en) titled “Election in Great Britain”. Title means name.
    I have just read an article (under) with the title of “Election in Great Britain.”
    Blount would often come to the place. He did not like the idea of leaving Gregory alone with Imagene. Ok
    Blount frequented the place. He resented the idea of leaving Gregory alone with Imogene. Ok
    The proposal must be given proper consideration.Ok
    The proposal must be given due consideration.Ok
    He has the reward that he deserves.Ok
    He has the reward that is entitled to him.Ok
    Too much attention is being paid to such a trifling matter.Ok
    Undue attention is being paid to such a trifling matter.Ok
    She likes to poke her nose into other people’s affairs. Ok but only other's affairs sounds good
    She likes to pry into other people’s affairs.Ok

    Thank you for your efforts.

    Regards,

    V
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    Last edited by sarat_106; 08-Aug-2009 at 12:28.

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