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    Default Please check the paragraph

    Could you please check the grammar in this paragraph.

    "
    nice.. congratulations!!! you must be excited about that :) is everything done there?
    the training is okay. i just need to spend more time in it.
    okay no problem, let him know just in case if i don't pick up the call that means i am in training.
    "
    Please let me know the mistakes and correct it.
    Thank you,
    Sarah

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    Exclamation Re: Please check the paragraph

    Quote Originally Posted by ghgh View Post
    Could you please check the grammar in this paragraph.
    "
    Nice.. congratulations!!! You must be excited about that : Is there everything done/ready? The training is okay. I just need to spend more time in it. Okay no problem, let him know that just in case (if) I don't pick up the call, it would (that) mean (s), I am in training

    "
    Please let me know the mistakes and correct it.
    Thank you,
    Sarah
    Delete the words in brackets.

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    Default Re: Please check the paragraph

    Thank you very much

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