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    hungconcon is offline Newbie
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    Angry pls help my check sentence structure

    "The Admin maintains the list of the buses and as well the Employees which cannot be accessed by the Employee. The Employee can alone change his Password from the booking window)"
    this sentence had correct?
    Thanks a lot for reading this far
    Hung
    Last edited by hungconcon; 15-Aug-2009 at 10:48.

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    susiedqq is offline Key Member
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    Default Re: pls help my check sentence structure

    "The Admin maintains a list of buses and employees. This list cannot be accessed by Employees. Employees can change private Passwords from the booking window"

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