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    Zoe2008 is offline Key Member
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    Are these sentences correct?

    Please send us a copy of your debit note (no. xxx) to clarify, as you had deducted USD600.00 from our payment

    Mary requested to pull in the schedule from Oct to first of Sept, please expedite your LC to us ASAP

    Please release the shipping order to us as early as you can, we expected deliver the goods next week. looking for your promptly reply.

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    Re: Are these sentences correct?

    Quote Originally Posted by Zoe2008 View Post
    Please send us a copy of your debit note (no. xxx) to clarify, as you had deducted USD600.00 from our payment

    Mary requested to pull in the schedule from Oct to first of Sept, please expedite your LC to us ASAP

    Please release the shipping order to us as early as you can, we expected deliver the goods next week. looking for your promptly reply.
    Here are my suggestions, corrections, and revisions.

    Please, send us a copy of your debit note (no. xxx) to clarify your reason for deducting USD600.00 from our payment.

    Mary requested that we pull in the schedule from October to the first of September. Please, expedite your LC to us ASAP.

    > I have a question in order to be clear about what I'm reading and correcting here: What does "pull in" mean here, and who is supposed to do it? <

    Please, release the shipping order to us as early as you can. We expected to deliver the goods next week. We look forward to your prompt reply.

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    Anglika is offline No Longer With Us
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    Re: Are these sentences correct?

    Quote Originally Posted by Zoe2008 View Post
    Please send us a copy of your debit note (no. xxx) to clarify your deduction of USD600.00 from our payment

    Mary would like the schedule to be changed from delivery in October to 1st September. Please expedite your LC to us ASAP

    Please release the shipping order to us as early as you can. We expect to deliver the goods next week. Looking for your promptly reply.
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