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    Zoe2008 is offline Key Member
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    Default is this sentence correct?

    Thank you for your reminder, I did noticed your required, however, we did not receive the B/L and cannot forward it to you. I will send it to you once the document receive. Besides, we are 5 days work and just read your message today, thanks for your patience

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    Exclamation Re: is this sentence correct?

    Quote Originally Posted by Zoe2008 View Post
    Thank you for your reminder, I did notice (d) your requirement (d), however, we did not receive the B/L and therefore, cannot forward it to you. I will send it to you once the document is received. Besides, we are having 5 days work and you just read your message today. Thanks for your patience
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    Smile Re: is this sentence correct?

    Quote Originally Posted by Zoe2008 View Post
    Thank you for your reminder, I did noticed your required, however, we did not receive the B/L and cannot forward it to you. I will send it to you once the document receive. Besides, we are 5 days work and just read your message today, thanks for your patience
    Here's my rewrite.

    Thank you for your reminder. We haven't received the B/L yet, so we are not able to forward it to you. I will send it to you as soon as we receive it.


    __________________________________________________ _________

    This needs to be corrected, but it's hard to know what you mean by it. If you could clarify it or rewrite it, I'd be glad to take a look at it again and make any necessary corrections or revisions.

    Besides, we are 5 days work and just read your message today, thanks for your patience

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