Please check for me on below sentence.
The item only appear in the report, when the item has updated into the “Master PO” worksheets in Master-SRN workbook. Please ensure you have updated those items are needed into “Master PO” worksheets.
The item only appears in the report when the item has updated into the “Master PO” worksheets in the Master-SRN workbook. Please, ensure that you have updated the necessary items into the “Master PO” worksheets.
There is another possibility for the first sentence. It depends on how people talk about this at your company and how the system works as to which one is correct: "has updated" or "has been updated".
The item only appears in the report when the item has been updated into the “Master PO” worksheets in the Master-SRN workbook.
I'd be glad to answer any questions about what I changed, or did not change for that matter. Just let me know if you have any questions.
PROESL - Steve
Last edited by PROESL; 24-Aug-2009 at 08:59. Reason: added information