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    Post Please correct paragraph About Thank giving Day!

    Let think of someone who did something good for you, who were side by side when you needed their help, and who made you smile when you felt lonely.

    Let think and remember a little, you'll realize that there are many things that you have to say the thank giving. And Thank giving Day is an good opportunity to express love and admiration of you for the people who took care and helped you.

    Thank giving Day don't fixed every year. Each year, it's held in a day and every country has a separate Thank giving Day.

    This day come from USA. It's held in the fourth Thursday of November. The American meet together, relax and hold feasts. They also spend little time to thank God who gave them material possessions that they were being enjoyed. But in Canada, this day is held on the second Monday of December every year. Because the autumn in there begin sooner than USA a month.

    There are many ways to you express your gratitude, it's depend on subject or the level of helping that you can choose a thank giving suitably.

    You can express by speech, saying Thank you or saying thank a lot... that's enough.


    Writing is also a good way. A short letter, a note or more details is a pretty thank you card is also say everything.


    Besides Giving postcard, you can also give an little attached gift as a bouquet flowers, a box of candy or a stuff that you made it by yourself. That's so wonderful. Surely, the receiver will be felt your honest.


    Thanking by action is also a fully significant expression: a tight-warm hug, a handshake or softer and more secret is a look, a grateful smile.


    It will not be too late to you express your gratitude with the people who had signification in your life. Let respect things that you were oversight indifferently!
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    Re: Please correct paragraph About Thank giving Day!

    Dear hai lua:

    Quote Originally Posted by hai_lua_t2 View Post
    Let think of someone who did something good for you, who were side by side when you needed their help, and who made you smile when you felt lonely.
    Think of someone who did something good for you, who was by your side when you needed them, and who made you smile when you felt lonely.

    Let think and remember a little, you'll realize that there are many things that you have to say the thank giving. And Thank giving Day is an good opportunity to express love and admiration of you for the people who took care and helped you.
    Let's think and remember a little; you'll realize that you have many things to be thankful for. Thanksgiving Day is a good opportunity to express your love and admiration for the people who have helped you.

    Thank giving Day don't fixed every year. Each year, it's held in a day and every country has a separate Thank giving Day.
    Thanksgiving Day takes place at different times in different countries.

    This day come from USA. It's held in the fourth Thursday of November. The American meet together, relax and hold feasts. They also spend little time to thank God who gave them material possessions that they were being enjoyed. But in Canada, this day is held on the second Monday of December every year. [Because the autumn in there begin sooner than USA a month.](?)
    In the U.S., where the holiday originated, Thanksgiving is the fourth Thursday of November. American families gather to spend time with each other, eat a special meal and give thanks for their blessings. In Canada this day is held on the second Monday of December every year.

    There are many ways to you express your gratitude, [it's depend on subject or the level of helping that you can choose a thank giving suitably.](?)
    There are many ways to express gratitude.

    You can express by speech, saying Thank you or saying thank a lot... that's enough.
    You can simply say, 'Thank you' or 'Thanks a lot' to people who have helped you.

    Writing is also a good way. A short letter, a note or more details is a pretty thank you card is also say everything.
    A handwritten note or letter is another good way to express your gratitude.

    Besides Giving postcard, you can also give an little attached gift as a bouquet flowers, a box of candy or a stuff that you made it by yourself. That's so wonderful. Surely, the receiver will be felt your honest.
    In addition, you may want to give a gift of flowers, candy or something handmade. Surely the recipient will feel your sincerity.

    Thanking by action is also a fully significant expression: a tight-warm hug, a handshake or softer and more secret is a look, a grateful smile.
    Lastly, thanks may be expressed through grateful hugs, handshakes and smiles.

    It will not be too late to you express your gratitude with the people who had signification in your life. [Let's respect things that you were oversight indifferently!](?)
    It's never too late to share your gratitude with the people who have been significant in your life. [Let's show respect for things and people we may have overlooked in the past.](?)
    I hope this is helpful,

    Petra

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    Re: Please correct paragraph About Thank giving Day!

    Thank pyoung so much!!!

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