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    bulgin03 is offline Newbie
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    Angry can any tell me how to go about writing a 500 words email please.

    500-800 word e-mail Details: Executive management at LRH Manufacturing is known to be very strong and opinionated. However, departmental (middle) management has the opposite reputation. In fact, there have been several initiatives that have failed due to the lack of support and oversight that was given by department managers. Department managers provided minimal support in corresponding changes in procedure/behavior. The organizational structure is very hierarchical.

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    Default Re: can any tell me how to go about writing a 500 words email please.

    Welcome to the forums.

    This looks very suspiciously like an assignment. We do not do people's work for them, but are willing to comment on what they have done. Put together what you think this e-mail should say, post it, and someone will comment.

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    Wink Re: can any tell me how to go about writing a 500 words email please.

    sorry am not asking anyone to do my assignment, what am saying is that an e-mail with 500-800 words is going to be boring have u read a e-mail that long before an my assignment is finish thanks.

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    Default Re: can any tell me how to go about writing a 500 words email please.

    Such a long e-mail might be boring like you are saying, neverthless you make it interesting with better ideas, good vocabulary, and a good register. If the recipient finds your mail fascinating, surely they would want to read it!
    And then, you must not mix up your ideas, because i have seen that many mails look boring because samethinns are repeated and mixed up...

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