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    gabrielaaa is offline Newbie
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    motivation letter

    Hello!!!
    My name is Gabriela and I have some problems with grammar and exprimation in my cover letter..I tried my best but is not enaugh.Can someone check my letter please.

    Thank you very much




    XXXXXXX 31.08.2009


    XXXXXXX




    Dear Sir/Madam



    Knowing about the reputation and multicultural character of … I will be honoured to work with you.

    I am looking for ….wich consist in my formation in Arts, course Fashion Design at University of Arts and Design, Timisoara,Romania.I completed my roumanian course with one year of specialisation at Université Paris 8, Paris,France.This couse had allowed me initiate in fashion style and design.Wishing to go further then only one national knowledge , I decided to study thoroughy my theoretic and practic studies by working at … being convienced that the initiation in many artistic universes are necessarly for professional future.

    Working at … who combine the national expression with international vision will allow me to beneficiate of an rich experience.

    The differents internships that I could do in foreign countries had develop my capacity of adaptation and my desire to work in team.Differents languages that I have practice sims to be adaptable to the environement of your society and modern fashion and design.This qualities will allow me to integrate quickly in your team. Conscientious, rigorous,I am ready to bring all the necessary efforts to achieve,to fulfil the targets fixed together.
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    Searching for language is offline Senior Member
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    Re: motivation letter

    Quote Originally Posted by gabrielaaa View Post
    Hello!!!
    My name is Gabriela and I have some problems with grammar and exprimation in my cover letter..I tried my best but is not enaugh.Can someone check my letter please.

    Thank you very much

    Please post your letter here, rather than attaching it as a file. Someone will help you then.

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