Computer technology has been growing rapidly for the last decade, and its importance to the modern world has led
tome pursue it for a higher level.
I have been interested in computer technology from a very early age, and I am eager to further my knowledge
,and keep up with advances in the world of computing. My growing interest for computing first began when I was 13; I built my own computer, learning from the bottom up, primarily about the hardware needed. Since then i have built several computers for family and friends , as well as alsowhile learning in more depth about a range of computer area’sthe vastness of computer fields: ranging through components, servers, and networks to programming – I have learned the HTML language to an adequate level, and I am also starting to delve into trickier, and more intriguing programming languages such as C++. I am constantly enthusiastic about continuing to develop my computer skills by researching, reading magazines – ‘CustomPC’, visiting technology stores, and discussing amongst friends.
I ran a gaming community forum board for one year, and sold webhosting for several months
,by splitting up a dedicated server and selling both Virtual servers and shared hosting plans. AlthoughHowever, recently, I have been using eBay to sell certain wholesale products – mostly computer software.
ok. that was a little grammatical errors in the essay. You have a good background and you should try to show it better. Work more on the first paragraph to tell something eye catching. The first paragraph is the most important one where you must present yourself and encorage the reader to read other paragraphs. In the last paragraph, I also thing you should tell why you have chosen that university or center and how its unique characteristics could help you reach your goals.
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