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    please check and correct for me

    I have known Troy since he was born. Troy is the son of friends of my wife and I and we are also the godparents of his older son, Raymond.

    please keep in mind Troy is 18 and Raymond is 23 if you can pick up the error and please fix

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    Re: please check and correct for me

    Quote Originally Posted by Unregistered View Post
    I have known Troy since he was born. Troy is the son of friends of my wife and I and we are also the godparents of his older son, Raymond.

    please keep in mind Troy is 18 and Raymond is 23 if you can pick up the error and please fix
    Troy is the son of friends of my wife and I and we are also the godparents of his older son, Raymond. This should be either, "...their older son, Raymond." or, "...his older brother, Raymond."

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