Der mr brade,
> Dear is spelled wrong
> Mr. is wrong
> The name begins with an upper-case letter
> I doubt that the name is spelled correctly (it might be, but I have my doubts)
> comma after the name
Dear Mr. Brade,
(note: Please verify this spelling of the name)
It was nice to talk to you on the phone
> period at the end of the sentence
It was nice to talk to you on the phone.
Iím currently seeking a position in which career growth and earrings are commensurate with my ability and efforts
I'm applying for an entry-level job in the mail room.