It was nice to talk to you on the phone

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Erika44100

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Der mr brade,
It was nice to talk to you on the phone

I’m currently seeking a position in which career growth and earrings are commensurate with my ability and efforts

Thank you,
 

Ann1977

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Der mr brade,
> Dear is spelled wrong
> Mr. is wrong
> The name begins with an upper-case letter
> I doubt that the name is spelled correctly (it might be, but I have my doubts)
> comma after the name
Dear Mr. Brade,
(note: Please verify this spelling of the name)

It was nice to talk to you on the phone
> period at the end of the sentence
It was nice to talk to you on the phone.

I’m currently seeking a position in which career growth and earrings are commensurate with my ability and efforts
I'm applying for an entry-level job in the mail room.
 

pyoung

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...and be sure you do not agree to be paid in 'earrings'...:cool:
 
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