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    Zoe2008 is offline Key Member
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    Default iS this sentence correct?

    After the effort from the factory, the schedule can be advance to 23 Oct. We shall send you the inspection ASAP.

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    Default Re: iS this sentence correct?

    Quote Originally Posted by Zoe2008 View Post
    After the effort from the factory, the schedule can be advance to 23 Oct. We shall send you the inspection ASAP.
    Please provide the context. What do you want to convey by "effort from the factory"..??

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    Default Re: iS this sentence correct?

    Quote Originally Posted by Zoe2008 View Post
    After the factory's good effort, the schedule can be advanced to 23 Oct. We shall send you the inspection booking ASAP.
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