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    run-on sentence, please insert commas

    You may proceed with minor landscaping activities on your property to repair and restore your yard behind your existing retaining wall to the condition your yard was in before the recent flooding as long as the following conditions are being met during your work:

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    Re: run-on sentence, please insert commas

    Quote Originally Posted by rere5101 View Post
    You may proceed with minor landscaping activities on your property, repairing and restoring your yard behind the existing retaining wall to the condition it was in before the recent flooding, as long as the following conditions are met during your work:
    I suggest the above changes.

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