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    I need help with my English presentation I am giving in class. Is this a good start? Please correct any mistakes!
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    I've decided to present to you the education system in the United Kingdom and in the United States of America. As you all know the schooling systems throughout the world are different and in my presentation you will find out how these two systems differ and what do they have in common.

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    Quote Originally Posted by ttadeya View Post
    Hello!

    I need help with my English presentation I am giving in class. Is this a good start? Please correct any mistakes!
    Thank you

    I've decided to present to you the education system in the United Kingdom and in the United States of America. As you all know the schooling systems throughout the world are different and in my presentation you will find out how these two systems differ and what do they have in common.
    I've decided to present to you the education systems in the United Kingdom and the United States of America. As you know, the schooling systems throughout the world are different and in my presentation you will discover how these two systems differ, and what they have in common.

    I think it's fine with my few suggested alterations.

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    Quote Originally Posted by ttadeya View Post
    Hello!

    I need help with my English presentation I am giving in class. Is this a good start? Please correct any mistakes!
    Thank you

    I've decided to present to you the education system in the United Kingdom and in the United States of America. As you all know the schooling systems throughout the world are different and in my presentation you will find out how these two systems differ and what do they have in common.
    I'd start with: I've decided to present to you a comparison between the education systems in the United Kingdom and the United States of America.

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