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    Default Sentence correction...

    My sentence is:

    I'm much happier, now that there are less people here.

    There is something wrong with this sentence, can you help me?

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    Default Re: Sentence correction...

    Quote Originally Posted by Unregistered View Post
    My sentence is:

    I'm much happier, now that there are less people here.

    There is something wrong with this sentence, can you help me?
    I'm much happier, now that there are less people here.

    > No comma after "happier"
    > "fewer" people, not "less" people

    I'm much happier now that there are fewer people here.

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