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    Word order

    Something doesn't sound right in my sentence below:

    The best time in primary school I remember was my school production.

    The 'I remember' just doesn't seem to be in the right place in my sentence. I can't quite seem to get how to improve on the word order.

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    Re: Word order

    Quote Originally Posted by Ulysses View Post
    Something doesn't sound right in my sentence below:

    The best time in primary school I remember was my school production.

    The 'I remember' just doesn't seem to be in the right place in my sentence. I can't quite seem to get how to improve on the word order.
    What about this?
    The best time that I remember in primary school was my school production.


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    Re: Word order

    Quote Originally Posted by Ulysses View Post
    Something doesn't sound right in my sentence below:

    The best time in primary school I remember was my school production.

    The 'I remember' just doesn't seem to be in the right place in my sentence. I can't quite seem to get how to improve on the word order.
    Syntax is fine. ... in primary school (that) I remember... = SVC


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    Re: Word order

    Quote Originally Posted by Ulysses View Post
    Something doesn't sound right in my sentence below:

    The best time in primary school I remember was my school production.

    The 'I remember' just doesn't seem to be in the right place in my sentence. I can't quite seem to get how to improve on the word order.
    You could modify the sentence as suggested, or simply take it that "I remember" is added information and set it off with commas.

    The best time in primary school was my school production.

    The best time in primary school, I remember, was my school production.

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