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    will you please check my paragraph

    whenever a war breaks out and enemy strikes over a city,then citizens are puzzled and do such things with which they harm themselves.In such times national guards protect the city and save people from assault.national guards prepare the citizens for civil defence.

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    Re: will you please check my paragraph

    please read this paragraph and do necessary correction,thank you.

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