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    Default Improving dense sentence structure

    Hi,
    I am glad to have discovered this resource and hope I am posting to the correct forum. I would like help on how to improve a dense sentence structure. Here is some sample text from an job interview feedback form:

    "He may do well in an IT staff position that requires little change in routine, but at his current level of development, not in a consulting role such as an Analyst."

    Is this a good structure or could it be improved?

    Thanks,
    Mic

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    Default Re: Improving tense sentence structure

    "He may do well in an IT staff position that requires little change in routine, but at his current level of development, not in a consulting role such as an Analyst."
    Welcome, Mic.

    What about?

    "He may do well in an IT staff position that requires little change in routine, but not in a consulting role such as an Analyst given his current level of development."

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