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    Please help to modify these sentence

    We planned both items to be shipped in one container last week. However, the inspection (result) for R56 was failed and need to rework. So that, we consolidate Y67 with two other items (in order) to avoid waste the container space as there is no other goods available for shipment.

    The correct shipped quantity was 300 pcs. This is the remaining quantity from last shipment. As 1000 pcs goods cannot be shipped completely in last container and remaining 300 pcs in this shipment.

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    Re: Please help to modify these sentence

    Quote Originally Posted by Zoe2008 View Post
    We planned both items to be shipped in one container last week.
    We planned to ship both items last week in one container.
    However, the inspection (result) for R56 was failed and need to rework.
    However, R56 failed its inspection and will need to be reworked.
    So that, we consolidate Y67 with two other items (in order) to avoid waste the container space as there is no other goods available for shipment.

    Therefore, in order to avoid wasted space, we have consolidated Y67 and two other items as these were the only goods available for shipment.
    The correct shipped quantity was 300 pcs.
    This is the remaining quantity from the last shipment. As 1000 pcs goods cannot be shipped completely in last container and remaining 300 pcs in this shipment.
    (Not sure I understand this part, but perhaps: Since the 1000pcs from the last order could not be shipped in one container, the remaining 300 pcs are included in this shipment.)
    Best wishes,

    Petra

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