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    I (as usual) will appreciate your wise advice and corrections...

    Consultancy firms are characterized for its huge amount of qualified people, its dynamism and the knowledge that produced and stored by them. This kind of firms can be local or international, specialized or global; nevertheless all of them have as common feature the sharing of knowledge and know how as the offered service. In addition, consultancy firms had disseminated itself in the last few years basically because down sourcing and outsourcing of big companies, this “boom” makes easier to find specific cases to research in this kind of firms. Therefore consultancy firms are ideal prospects for research in the field of management.

    Thanks!
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    Consultancy firms are characterized by their huge numbers of qualified people, their dynamism and the knowledge that is/has been produced and stored by them. This kind of firm can be local or international, specialized or global; nevertheless, all of them have the sharing of knowledge in common and offer know how as a service. In addition, consultancy firms have disseminated themselves in the last few years basically because of downsourcing and outsourcing by big companies, this “boom” makes it easier to find specific cases to research in this field. Therefore, consultancy firms are ideal prospects for research in the field of management.

    Some suggestions.

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    Thank you again... many suggestions this time...

    I only have a question about one of your suggestions. You suggest "numbers" instead of amount in the first sentence:

    huge numbers of qualified people.

    what I didn't understand was why the "S" at the end of "numberS"?

    Thanks again!!!

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    Many firms, many numbers- 300 here, 400 there.

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