Well, it's understandable, but there are quite a few problems with verb tenses and problems with syntax.hi this is the topic plz what band this essay deserve:The world is experiencing a dramatic increase in population,this is causing problems not only for poor,undeveloped countries,but also for industrialized and developing nations.Describe some of the problems that overpopulation causes,and suggest at least one possible solution.
_As we are living in the 21st century,new problems have been appeared.
Nowadays many nations or countries are suffering from different issues,such as
poverty,illiteracy....However,most of social scientists claimed that these
problems are caused by the overpopulation.
_The are several reasons that prod us to be worried about the high rate of
increasing people.In most of the undeveloped countries providing food is
becoming a real challenge not because these nations don t have enough
means to offer it,But because the demand is higher than the supply.In
addition,the high number of umployed people is more seen in poorest nations
their governments can t provide sufficient jobs.
_As the case of underdeveloped countries,many rich nations are still
struggling to defuse the threats under the high rising of population.The rate
of crimes is becoming more important in most of developed countries such as
USA,UK..and this is due to the the high number of people living in these
areas.Moreover,the consumption of drug between young people knew an
increase these last years.
_To conclude,I think the best way to limit the high raising of people around
the world,is to set some fines for families who get more than 2 children,
and also by awaring people about what overpopulation can have as bad
effects on our lifestyle and future.That s why we are all called to unify our
efforts in order to strive this phenomenal with view to make our world
safer and peaceful.
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