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    _MaTaDoR_ is offline Newbie
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    Hi all,
    I need some help this paragraph.Is it right as grammar especially passive?



    "Thank you for your interest.
    The bilatreal agreement was sent to you by post in last week by the my university tha ABC.Furthermore I know XYZ's application deadline 30 November.It may be late our post.For this reason all the same I am sending our bilatreal agreement and my application documents by mail and besides by post."


    thank you

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    Quote Originally Posted by _MaTaDoR_ View Post
    Hi all,
    I need some help with this paragraph. Is it right as grammar especially passive? (Is it grammatically correct, especially the parts written in the passive voice?)



    "Thank you for your interest.
    The bilateral agreement was sent to you by post in last week by the my university, the ABC. Furthermore, I know XYZ's application deadline 30 November. (I'm not sure what this means.) It may be late because our post is unreliable. For this reason, all the same I am sending our bilateral agreement and my application documents by mail and also by post.('mail' and 'post' are the same thing. Do you mean, 'by email and by post'?)


    thank you
    Also, please note that there in a space after periods (full stops) and commas.

    I hope this is helpful,

    Petra

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    _MaTaDoR_ is offline Newbie
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    thank you for your reply @pyoung
    it was very useful

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