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  1. CS-Student
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    Hello


    I have a question about "example paragraph"

    lets say that we have a paragraph about people's behavior and I wrote the followeing:


    Different poeple act in a very different way.For example some people act aggressively towards everything, for example, a friend of mine was very aggressive towards a salesman because they didn't agree on a price.

    My point is : can I give an example on the example ?


    Regards

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    Re: I need immediate help

    Quote Originally Posted by CS-Student View Post
    Hello


    I have a question about "example paragraph"

    lets say that we have a paragraph about people's behavior and I wrote the followeing:


    Different poeple act in a very different way.For example some people act aggressively towards everything, for example, a friend of mine was very aggressive towards a salesman because they didn't agree on a price.

    My point is : can I give an example on the example ?


    Regards
    I'd say it's better not to. Besides that is not an example of how different people act in very different ways. It is an example of how one person behaves. That is, the first "for example" is not correct.


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    Re: I need immediate help

    Thank you

    I appreciate your reply

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