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    Default Sentence restructure

    I would like to seek anyone assistance to comment my sentences as below. Thanks

    1) Don't reply on technical energy saving techniques
    Rewrite:Human issue to be made attention rather than technical aspects.


    2) Don't just busily practising energy conservation without going on to training
    Rewrite:Training need to be concentrated and provided with carrying energy saving plan

    3) Don't give up easily even under adverse conditions
    Rewrite:Problems to be solved rather than dismissed


    4) Don't think the energy conservation job is easy
    Rewrite:Difficult work of energy conservation to be bear in mind everytime

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    Default Re: Sentence restructure

    1.
    A: Don't rely only on technical energy saving techniques.
    B: The focus should be on human behavior rather than technical energy saving techniques.


    3.
    A: Don't give up easily even under adverse conditions.
    B: If at first you don't succeed, try try again.





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