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    Hello!
    Could you,please, check and correct my cover letter and CV.
    I will be very appreciated if you do!
    All advices and remarks are welcome!

    My cover letter:

    Dear Sir / Madam,

    From your company's web site I learned about your need for
    an entry-level specialist in Corporate Finance Department.

    I will complete my studies at Moscow University of Steel and
    Alloys with a major in economics and management in mid-June
    of 2004, and will be available for employment at that time.
    My aspiration is to work for a company that has your
    excellent reputation. I am confident that my combination of
    practical work experience and solid educational experience
    has prepared me for making an immediate contribution to
    Deloitte Touche Tohmatsu.

    Enclosed is a copy of my resume, which more fully details my
    qualifications.

    I would welcome the opportunity to interview with you, and
    will contact you in the next two weeks to see if you need
    any additional information from me.

    Thank you for your consideration.

    Yours faithfully,
    Nadezhda Sukhanova


    My CV:

    PERSONAL DATA

    Name: Sukhanova Nadezhda
    DOB: April 5 ,1983
    Address: #904 bld.83/1, Profsoyuznaya street, 117279 Moscow, Russia


    BASIC EDUCATION

    2000-present– Moscow Institute of Steel and Alloys
    (Technological University);
    Major: Economics and management
    Specialization: economist-manager
    Economics and Informatics Department.
    Anticipated graduation date: June, 2005

    PRACTICAL TRAININGS

    07/2004-08/2004, 07/2003-08/2003 – Novolipetsk Iron and Steel Corporation, Lipetsk, Russia.
    Finance department;
    Responsibilities: unfinished production calculation; cost accounting calculation; research of ferrous metals market.
    07/2002-08/2002 – Cherepovets Iron and Steel Works ‘Severstal’, Cherepovets, Russia.
    In-depth study of industrial process.

    WORK EXPERIENCE

    08/2004-09/2004-Bank ‘Russian Standard’, Sales Department manager, consumer crediting;
    11/2003-01/2004-Tax Registration Center, accountant;
    08/2003-10/2003-‘Vinta Star’ company (Automated Accounting Systems), consultant-accountant

    ADDITIONAL EDUCATION
    10/2004-02/2005- Business English (upper-intermediate level)-English First Russia
    02/2003-06/2003- English course (upper-intermediate level)-Moscow International Higher Business School
    04/1997-10/1998- English course (intermediate level)-Russian Branch of the European School of Education by Correspondence

    FOREIGN LANGUAGES

    English - fluent;
    French – basic level

    PROFESSIONAL SKILLS

    Computer literate: Windows, MS Office, Internet, Timeline, Statistica 6.0, FAR manager.


    ADDITIONAL INFO
    Took part in international (Poland, Krakow) and regional scientific conferences(05/2004).

    Communicative, responsible, initiative, able to work both individually and as a part of a team, able to work in stress environment


    Thanks in advance!!!
    Last edited by Curly; 16-Mar-2005 at 21:02.

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    I'll start- I would change the opening line= get to the point about writitng for the job.

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