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    The story of revealing private information from unethical employees would have been avoided if principles of harm minimization had applied

    thank you

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    Quote Originally Posted by Unregistered
    Is this correct ?


    The story of revealing private information from unethical employees would have been avoided if principles of harm minimization had applied

    thank you
    I think I get the idea but I would suggest a few changes:

    The incident of private information dislosure could/would have been avoided if the principles of professional conduct had been applied by certain employees.

    Private information disclosure is not only harmful and damaging but in most cases it's illegal as well.

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