Thanks for the interesting story. I also enjoy the introduction:
"Helping people in need is a good and essential part of my life, a kind of destiny” is a famous quote by Zig Ziglar. In our life today, where crimes are increasing, everyone needs a hero that will be there in time of need. I remember a story about myself when I was a boy.
However, it is hard to find an hero in the stress today.
Who will be the one jump into the water to save a child from drowning ?
Who will rush headlong into a burning house to save life of a complete stranger or even a screaming kitten?
This is only my thought.
As I walked by, I saw this kid running toward the boy.
I think it should be "As I was passing by, I saw..."
When I saw the blood that was coming out of my nose I cried. I looked at the kid’s face and grabbed the kid’s hair. I pulled his hair and I got some. Then a guy came to stop us. (need a sentence to make it clearer to transform from one thing to another)
Remembering that day is like comparing myself to a blanket.
I'm only a student like you.