Simple and short letter. Isn't it Sports and not Sport?Can someone please help me and correct my mistakes? :)I don't know if the content and language is ok...
Thanks a lot! :)))
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am applying for entrance to Sport Development program at the XXX for the 2010 September. I would like to become an expert in Sport Management, development and coaching. I
think thatfind this is afield very interesting and consider it an important profession nowadaysin today's world.
In spring 2010 I will graduate from XXX
and I will getwith an undergraduate educationdegree. I have studied English for 9 years and my current English curriculum mark is 7 ( which should beequivalent to that of GCSE B level), and my current Sport curriculum is 9. Last year I madedid/conducted research work in Psychology & Sociology aboutrelated to the evolution of advertisement , its evolution and psychology linking with factors ofand its psychological impact on customers' attention. , which was evaluated withThis research received an evaluation of mark 10 and was sent to next round of competition. Last year I also completed geography curriculum with final mark of 7.
Sport and Math are my favorite subjects
, whichthat I study with pleasuregreat interest. I like to know aboutstay up to date with the latest sport and health news to learn about sport in the society. Some of my best qualities are purposefulness, persistence andI lead a purposeful life and consider myself amhard working and persistent in achieving my goals. I am social, friendly, and withhave good communication skills.
Besides studies, my biggest hobby is basketball. I
amhave been practicing this gamebasketball for last 10 years and I have gained various accomplishments inam proud to be part of the team that won various international and national tournaments with my team. I have beenserved as a team captain . Now I am playing in, and am a member of both my school team and inbasketball club XXX . This gameBasketball taught me how to work in a team and be more responsible. I've also heard that your university has a good basketball team, whichand I would love to be a part of and contribute like to play and offer their support.
For me sports is not just
aabout games or physical activities, it is a lifestyle. Studies of Sport Development inat your University will help me fulfill my dream of achieving a high professional level, pursuing a rewarding career, and build on my passion with sports. to achieve high professional level, which I am willing to have, and hopefully will give me the opportunities for getting a good job after graduating and relate to my life in sports, because it is my dream. I am enclosing enclosethe motivation letter and two recommendations for my studies.
Thank you very much for your attention and for your consideration of my application. I look forward to hearing from you soon.