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    Default Are these sentences correct.

    1) How many scene of the aiport will appear in the movie?
    2) The main scene of the movie will take a place in the office because it is a movie about office. (For example like the movie Friends, the scene is always in the apartment).

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    Default Re: Are these sentences correct.

    Quote Originally Posted by scott833 View Post
    1) How many scene of the aiport will appear in the movie?
    2) The main scene of the movie will take a place in the office because it is a movie about office. (For example like the movie Friends, the scene is always in the apartment).
    (Not a teacher) Your sentences are very good. May I make just a few suggestions? (1) "Scene" should be plural. You might consider: How many airport scenes will be in the movie? (2) Perhaps you might want to change "the office" to "an office." You might consider: The main scene takes place in an office because the movie is about office life (or "office workers").

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