When it comes to animal rights, PETA is strongly involved. Educating the public. Performing cruelty investigations. Conducting significant research. Operating animal rescues. Passing laws through legislation. Setting up special events. Involving the celebrity voice. Conducting protest campaigns. All of these agents and more all aid in fighting for animal justice.
My teacher gave the example: We had a heck of a party last night. Confetti. A band. A goumet spread.
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