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Government should aid poor countries
Some people consider that rich countries should aid other countries to help them to rise up. Increasingly, however, many people believe that each country should help itself to learn how to win against every difficult which faces it. This essay will describe some of the arguments for and against rich country's aid to poor country.
On the one hand, aid of rich countries to poor countries causes some advantageous on individual and over the world. One of the main advantageous of aid is to secure rich countries security. For example Saudi Arabia always supports some poor countries especially the nearest countries such as Yemen. This aid can keep Yemen national security safe and consequently Saudi national security will be safe. Secondly, Some countries cannot find convenience support for healthy problems to reduce a risk of spreading a new disease through living things or mammals. Some nations think that aid suppose participate to reduce some dangerous diseases such as swine flu, AIDS.
However the features of aid can also be profusion. Firstly, some countries need to improve themselves before they improve other countries. In the past Saudi Arabia was spending massive amounts to improve poor countries although it needs to improve its infrastructures. Some countries abuse poor countries when they aim to have some allies to help them when they need. Kuwait has aided other countries and they helped it when it was in trouble situation. A third approach is to colonize poor countries. Some countries such as USA sometimes funds poor countries to ensure that poor countries follow their foreign policies.
In conclusion, as we have seen previously people have different opinions and views about rich countries aid to poor countries. I can understand way people may not see things by the some way. Personally I am convinced to believe that aid is beneficial because it should be funded to whom it may concern eventhough it was internal needing.