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Who helps me grow up, gives me advice, takes care of me, shows me the right way, always supports me greatly, gives me a birthdate and does many many things just for me. It's my mother. I love her and really admire her for many reasons.
Perhaps, the main thing that makes me admire her the most is the fact that she was my first teacher. She has been teaching me everything since I was young until now, and will be for the future. I remember that the first foreign language I studied from her is Russian. I could speak some simple words such as "hello"and "good bye"in Russian when I was just 5 years old. At that time, I wrote a poem about the ant (you mean ant or aunt?) and my mom. Of course, she was the first person willing to listen to me.
Now, she remains my best friend. I think she is the greatest psychologist I have ever known. Sometimes, when I am down because of failure in my life, I always approach her seeking advice. As I expect, I always felt better after talking to her.
I also admire her for her personality which is I can describe as a mix of honesty and strong faith in God. A cause and effect equation. " Take us by ourselves into others' position before doing anything" she said. And she is also a predictor. She can tell the future from her dreams. She has once told me that she had found out about my father before meeting him . Besides, she was sure that I would be a boy before getting pregnant. Oh my god! it's strange. I can not do the same thing.
There is a woman who takes an important part in my life and changes my thoughts and actions. I really love my mother. I think I am the happiest person in the world because I have a great mother like her. How do you think of your mother?